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A.M.O.K. :: 651 :: Synopsis
  I was a good slave. I didn 't even know I was a slave.
Amok 651: mind-controlled kiler for the New World Order.

80 words synopsis

  • Until his accident, Murdoch Jefferson thought he was another average retired Canadian.
  • Except, his memories now leak: clandestine cocaine flights to Arkansas during Iran Contra days. School of Americas “interrogation” sessions. Satanic rituals from childhood. 
  • His sanity crumbles while grandaughter and therapist, activists, ex-KGB agents and dead comrades trigger his multiples personalities.
  • Among the rubbles of the 2nd and last US Civil War, Murdoch searches for his creator and torturer, Nazi programmer Dr. Greenbaum.
  • And he finds him.

1 page Synopsis

  • Meet Murdoch A. Jefferson. 
  • White. Canadian. Retired. Widowed. Lives in the West End. 
  • His grand daughter Sam visits him regularly and shocks him into deep trances.  His retirement home is nice and Charlene, the office manager, adores him. 
  • He regularly feeds the crows in Stanley Park.  His shrink, Dr. Watson, is also his long time programmer from the CIA’s Operation Paperclip. 
  • Sometimes he mutilates himself in his shower but doesn’t remember.
  • One sunny day, Murdoch has a stupid head injury. 
  • That’s when his visions start: human sacrifices, with him and other children present.  
  • While Dr. Watson is away, his assistant Dr. Santarik gains Murdoch’s trust and fingerprints his brain: the “visions” did happen. The children were indeed killed. . 
  • One of them shows up on CNN: Fernandez, now a DEA agent recently killed in mission.  
  • Murdoch tries to contact Pompilus, the journalist who covered the botched DEA operation.
  • Fernandez shows up in Murdoch’s retirement home and dies in the strange shootout that ensues while Murdoch walks away alive. 
  • Next morning, Murdoch turns up in Strathcona. 
  • He is now Jerry Lemuel. He lives in a boarding house for retired longshoremen by Skid Row. Alice is his Chinese lover.
  • Same night, a bicycle courier with Maori tattoos and her girlfriend kidnap him.
  • They rip off his wisdom teeth. Bring him to a fishing camp where he’s drugged and buried alive while around him Native men hold a peyote ceremony. 
  • That’s how Murdoch remembers more: cocaine bags being passed as Red Cross supplies. Clandestine flights to Mensa Airport, Arkansas.
  • And the sniper’s bullet that missed him and instead killed a little girl.
  • Next morning, Murdoch leaves the Native men and follows Fiorenti, comrade from the Iran Contra days, who brings him to a Buddhist monastery.
  • Fiorenti, now dying from AIDS, updates Murdoch: he, Murdoch, aka Jerry Lemuel, aka Sgt. Brownfield, was a highly talented “Intelligence Specialist / Torturer” at the School of Americas. 
  • Him, Fernandez, Fiorenti and 2 other men were turned into AMOKs, mind controlled killers for the New World Order.
  • Meanwhile, Dr. Watson rebuilds Sam and uses her remote viewing skills to locate Murdoch. 
  • He recruits five other local Amoks and enlists Dr Greenbaum, his superior, into a satanic ritual that requires slaughtering two young twins.
  • Sam gets reactivated. She expertly seduces Pompilus. Puts him under complete control.
  • Murdoch and Fiorenti meet with Krokofiev, ex KGB official.
  • Their meeting is interrupted by psychic attacks that leave other civilians killing each other in a mind-controlled frenzy. Murdoch returns to the monastery. 
  • While he’s being debriefed in a floatation tank, masked soldiers slaughter the monks. 
  • Murdoch escapes, to be picked up later on by Bicycle Courier and delivered to Krokofiev’s headquarters, a high end Miami penthouse.
  • Krokofiev uses high tech and good old torture to locate the programming that turned Murdoch, Fernandez and others into mind controlled killers 
  • That's when their building - and the 2 private helicos - gets destroyed by  air to air missiles.
  • Using the building’s water tanks, Murdoch and Krofoviev barely escape Death.
  • Murdoch now has 15 minutes to safely reach the UN refugee camp, while Dr. Watson chases him with 4 other Amoks.
  • Meet Richard Murdoch Jefferson. Stranded with his memories, his multiples personalities and his own soul, right in downtown Miami, where the second and last American civil war has just started.
  • AMOK 651. Awakening.
  • He was a good slave. He didn't even know he was a slave.

I was a good slave. I didn 't even know I was a slave.
Amok 651: mind-controlled kiler for the New World Order.


 


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